Haiku Past Due...

I missed the Haiku deadline this past Monday once again.  With everything 
that's been going on here with the failing health of Jason's father, and a 
multitude of other things, I haven't exactly been up to snuff on remembering 
things.  Especially deadlines. 

Even though it's too late for judgement my friend, Rafa, has encouraged me 
to post it anyway. So here it is.  Let me know what you think.


Petals drift slowly.
Moments become memories.
Bittersweet silence...


1 comment:

  1. CoreyJo:

    You know I think it's purty, but what does my silly ass know?!?!?

    It has a beautiful sense of time. But what I like most is how you meshed a peaceful yet melancholy feel to the whole poem.

    No need for any theatrics or anything over the top, just sweet and quiet.



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