2/7/12

Haiku...



Click of the hammer...
Snap of the trigger... BULLS EYE!
"We have a WINNER!"
~CoreyJo




Ding! Ding! Ding! Ding! Ding!
Bells ring as the light goes on.
Brilliant idea!
~CoreyJo





This weeks contest is hosted by Serendipity at Serendipitous Wild Moments. Be sure to check out the competition. Good luck to all.

LoveHuggs
CoreyJo



5 comments:

  1. I don't get it. I have never been a fan of poetry and haiku's make even less sense.... sigh.

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  2. In the weekly contest I try to enter there is always a theme picked by the current judge. You have to try to create a sense of that theme using a 5-7-5 syllable format. The best ones have you thinking one thing then Bam! another. Often they are vague and left to the reader to interpret, kind of like a painting.

    It's a brain challenge for me. I don't usually rank so well, but it's fun :¬)

    CoreyJo

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  3. Aw, Curious, come play wif' us--Haiku is the economical expression of a specific moment in time that evokes recognition in the reader--an "aha!" response.

    CoreyJo
    that first one is mah favorite.

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  4. Thanks Aunty.

    This theme was hard. I could hear a million and one sounds, I just couldn't put them together. Thanks for stopping by too :)

    Huggs
    CoreyJo

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  5. CoreyJo:
    I LOVE your slight changes!

    The first one is super powerful (a might frightening, but POWERFUL)!!

    Remind me NOT to piss you off any time soon...

    That first visual really hits the mark, but I also really love you light bulb image. VERY WELL DONE!!!

    Be blessed with a smile that brightens your day--

    Rafa

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