Just beautiful, CoreyJo. Such complex emotions tied into 17 simple syllables. PERFECT.
I haven't been able to tie much poetic prose together of late, but you have inspired me with some words, and thought I'd share:
Margaret is a shining star So bright she can't be seen Close your eyes and think of her As only you can do Picture her with smiling face Giggles all aglow Reaching with her little hand Pigtails tied just so
Tap into all your senses Know she's all about Listen with your heart splayed wide Feel her in your soul See her with your mind's eye clear Don't shed a sarrowed tear Smell her, taste her, eat her up As if it's your last breath Then fill your lungs with her sweet song Sing it to the Heavens
Wrap yourself in swaddled care As she washes through Safe within the knowledge All that's must to do Is close your eyes and think of her As only Mom can do
♥
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful, CoreyJo. Such complex emotions tied into 17 simple syllables. PERFECT.
ReplyDeleteI haven't been able to tie much poetic prose together of late, but you have inspired me with some words, and thought I'd share:
Margaret is a shining star
So bright she can't be seen
Close your eyes and think of her
As only you can do
Picture her with smiling face
Giggles all aglow
Reaching with her little hand
Pigtails tied just so
Tap into all your senses
Know she's all about
Listen with your heart splayed wide
Feel her in your soul
See her with your mind's eye clear
Don't shed a sarrowed tear
Smell her, taste her, eat her up
As if it's your last breath
Then fill your lungs with her sweet song
Sing it to the Heavens
Wrap yourself in swaddled care
As she washes through
Safe within the knowledge
All that's must to do
Is close your eyes and think of her
As only Mom can do
LOVE you--
Rafa
Rafa,
DeleteIt's beautiful, I love it. It makes you feel, and you once told me that as long as it makes you feel that's all that matters.
I'm glad I could inspire you, and hope to do so again and again.
Love you Darling
CoreyJo
I <3 this
ReplyDeleteThank you Becca ♥
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